Tanner Lebo Miss Wiederrich English 2 13 April 2018 My Struggles on the Diamond Everyone deals with adversity sometime in their life. The first time I dealt with it and overcame it was in my first season of high school baseball. I elected not to play baseball in the spring but instead run track. So, […]
Tanner Lebo Mrs. Jank English 2 9 February 2018 The Disposablility of Those in Poverty in America In today’s American society, poor people and those in poverty are viewed as being disposable. There are multiple reasons that a person can be led to believe this. One is that many people have developed stereotypes towards the […]
This semester, I have progressed in the areas of speaking, thinking, reading, and writing. In speaking, I have learned how to make more eye contact and really connect with the audience in order to make you speech heard. I also learned that I tick a lot after a sentence, and I especially did in the […]
Note to Reader: I did a lot to develop and change this piece. I changed the whole plot and storyline a bit, and I think it made it better. I hope the story is more suspenseful, now that I have revised it more. I would like the reader to know that this could possibly just […]
I changed up my piece a bit. This is a revised draft and changed a lot of my storyline and added more detail. A crumpled, battered newspaper fluttered through the wind and slowly came to a stop, hitting a man walking on the sidewalk. He scratched the gray hairs on his chin before […]
This is my very rough draft of a creative writing piece. It is a basic storyline that hasn’t been developed yet, with a very abrupt ending. I still will add many details to it, because this is quickly done and not yet revised yet. A crumpled, battered newspaper fluttered through the wind and slowly […]
“Hurry up Isaac!” Johannes’ dad, Jeff, screamed from the campsite. “We haven’t got all night!” “It’s just a night hike,” Isaac whispered to himself as he walked out of the camper. Isaac and Arthur were on a camping trip over Halloween with their friend Johannes, and his dad, Jeff. The group was embarking on a […]
Introduction: This is the rough draft of my suspense piece. I think this is a very raw version of the story, and it has a lot to improve on, including suspense, character development, and description. I want to make it more suspenseful, so that when the end comes, it will be a lot crazier and […]
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