This is my 2nd draft of my poem. I feel decent about it, but I feel like it sounds kinda weird and doesn’t accomplish what it’s supposed to. My questions would be if the poem makes sense about what I’m trying to show, if it even sounds like a poem, and if I have parts […]
I am from a piano, from Wilson mitt to Titleist golf ball. I am from the makeshift baseball field in the basement exciting and time-consuming. I am from the grass in the backyard, the place I spent all my summers playing on. I’m from football Saturdays and blue eyes, from Travis Eugene and Renae Lynn. […]
Meets Objective Persuasive Speech I do pretty well when it comes to speeches. Attached is the outline for my persuasive speech. I feel very comfortable when I’m speaking and presenting to people. I still could improve upon parts where I memorize more and make more eye contact, so I can engage with the audience […]
Tanner L. . Alternate Intro(Using this one): Hello, my name is Tanner Lebo, and I am a student here at Lincoln Lutheran. I am here to talk to you about marijuana.[]The great Tupac once said, “Stop killing each other man. Let’s just smoke a blunt.”[]Love or hate it, marijuana is one heck of […]
Shows improvement Reading Response Reading Response 2 I struggle when I comes to recognizing this. I usually just read, and never see how the author writes it. I don’t understand how to see this. Even when I’m trying to consider this, I never can come up with explain how the the author wrote it. […]
Meets Objective Hotel Rwanda Disposable People Once again, I’m not the best at application when it comes to reading. As a whole, I consider myself a good reader and can understand and comprehend most things. When applying it to my life, though, I struggle a bit. I usually don’t see the application side […]
Shows Improvement American Dream Essay Disposability Of Mice and Men I am getting better at the analysis side of things. I’m not very good at analyzing the text and mostly read it for fun. But this year, with a little bit of help, I improved a bit on analyzing the text and applying […]
Masters Objective American Dream I think I mastered the objective of grammar and conventions. When it comes to this section, I think I can recognize grammar mistakes well and be able to correct them. Overall, I think I am great at grammar and rarely make mistakes in that category, so that is why […]
Rank= Shows Improvement Pieces Rough Draft for Story Final Draft I think that I show improvement through big picture and small revisions. You can see in this story how I make big revisions. I think I have improved a lot in that area because I can recognize where the story is dull or it doesn’t […]
Rank: Meets objective Pieces: Adversity Essay Disposable People Essay American Dream Essay I think I met the objective for acedemic writing. I analyzed the text very well and wrote logical pieces with very good analysis and application through the books I read and what I’ve seen in my life. I did very good in […]
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