Rank= Shows Improvement
I think that I show improvement through big picture and small revisions. You can see in this story how I make big revisions. I think I have improved a lot in that area because I can recognize where the story is dull or it doesn’t flow. I can also recognize grammar well, for the small parts. However, I lack the ability to see grammar with commas and word choice, and that’s why I didn’t rate myself higher.