That Was I Poem- 2nd Draft

 This is my 2nd draft of my poem. I feel decent about it, but I feel like it sounds kinda weird and doesn’t accomplish what it’s supposed to. My questions would be if the poem makes sense about what I’m trying to show, if it even sounds like a poem, and if I have parts […]

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Semester Progress

This semester, I have progressed in the areas of speaking, thinking, reading, and writing. In speaking, I have learned how to make more eye contact and really connect with the audience in order to make you speech heard. I also learned that I tick a lot after a sentence, and I especially did in the […]

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Revised Creative Writing

  I changed up my piece a bit. This is a revised draft and changed a lot of my storyline and added more detail.   A crumpled, battered newspaper fluttered through the wind and slowly came to a stop, hitting a man walking on the sidewalk. He scratched the gray hairs on his chin before […]

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Creative Writing Rough Draft

This is my very rough draft of a creative writing piece. It is a basic storyline that hasn’t been developed yet, with a very abrupt ending. I still will add many details to it, because this is quickly done and not yet revised yet.   A crumpled, battered newspaper fluttered through the wind and slowly […]

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Suspense Draft

Introduction: This is the rough draft of my suspense piece.  I think this is a very raw version of the story, and it has a lot to improve on, including suspense, character development, and description. I want to make it more suspenseful, so that when the end comes, it will be a lot crazier and […]

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